David, thank you. That means the world to hear. And I hope, truly, that life brings you something that makes you feel seen, valued, and whole. Sometimes the story we need most is the one that shows us what's possible. ❤️
Thank you so much, Alan! I really appreciate the support and the encouragement. I'm thrilled to hear that you're loving the story and the pictures that go with it! More exciting things are on the way. xx
So romantic, Arden. I enjoy these little “moment” stories.
One more proofread though (sorry, English major here):
-If Will climbed down the hill to rescue Arden, how did he get him back up to the vehicle? Did it do a Tesla self-drive down to the bottom of the gorge?
-Will leaves for bandages but comes back for ice. Arden seemingly doesn’t get his ankle wrapped. Things get pretty physical despite it. Maybe Will’s lovemaking includes an “elevation” of Arden’s ankle to his shoulder? Haha.
-The felching bit - Will tastes his cum, not Arden’s (presumably).
Thank you so much for your careful reading and your honest, thoughtful feedback — and for delivering it with such warmth and humor. It genuinely means a lot.
I want to be transparent with you: my stories are originally written in Hungarian, and I translate them into English myself. It’s not a perfect process, and sometimes things slip through — especially when life gets complicated, as it has been lately.
I didn’t want to leave my readers without a new story, even during a more difficult personal period. But you’re absolutely right, and I will correct every mistake you pointed out.
Thank you for being the kind of reader who pays attention. That’s rare, and I’m grateful for it.
Truthfully, I didn’t consider the language change, even though I know you’re Hungarian. Please forgive me for the oversight (ignorance?).
I hope it’s clear from previous comments that I *LOVE* your writing and consume it joyfully. So thank you for saying “with warmth and humor” because they’re genuine.
I have a tendency to be over-aware of grammar/spelling/continuity quirks as I read. Normally, I keep my thoughts to myself but spotting multiple things in a short story compelled me - so others would experience it for the beautiful thing it is. ❤️
Thank you, MV1! 😊 This means so much to me. Please don't apologize for being thorough - that's exactly the kind of reader I want to have. Your attention to detail is a gift, and I'm grateful you shared it with me. It will only make the next story better. Thank you for reading with such care and heart. 🙏❤️
Arden, what a nice and sensual story. Born out of an accident, "Arden" is discovered by Will and brought to the safety and shelter of his cabin. And then Will goes into doctor mode to make sure nothing is broken and the sprain doesn't get any worse. And nothing gets worse. Only better. And warmer. And hotter. And the words for the sex scenes were "soft" but powerful. And didn't disappoint. 😊
If there is more Arden and Will, make sure they walk together on their hikes. Unless Will brings home another injured hiker. 🥵
Dave, this comment absolutely made my day! 😊 You've perfectly captured exactly what I was going for - that slow burn from accident to safety to something much, much hotter. And "soft but powerful" is such a beautiful way to describe those scenes. That's exactly the energy I wanted.
As for more Arden and Will... let's just say I don't think Will will be bringing home any other injured hikers. He's got his hands full with this one. But they might just get lost on a hike together again soon... 🥵🔥
Thank you for reading so closely and for this incredible feedback. It means the world! 🙏❤️
Loved it. Wish something like that would happen to me.
David, thank you. That means the world to hear. And I hope, truly, that life brings you something that makes you feel seen, valued, and whole. Sometimes the story we need most is the one that shows us what's possible. ❤️
I'd brake a leg to be treated like that. )ove the story being read and the hot pictures to accompany it xx
Thank you so much, Alan! I really appreciate the support and the encouragement. I'm thrilled to hear that you're loving the story and the pictures that go with it! More exciting things are on the way. xx
So romantic, Arden. I enjoy these little “moment” stories.
One more proofread though (sorry, English major here):
-If Will climbed down the hill to rescue Arden, how did he get him back up to the vehicle? Did it do a Tesla self-drive down to the bottom of the gorge?
-Will leaves for bandages but comes back for ice. Arden seemingly doesn’t get his ankle wrapped. Things get pretty physical despite it. Maybe Will’s lovemaking includes an “elevation” of Arden’s ankle to his shoulder? Haha.
-The felching bit - Will tastes his cum, not Arden’s (presumably).
-There are two “come, let’s make breakfasts”.
Dear MV1,
Thank you so much for your careful reading and your honest, thoughtful feedback — and for delivering it with such warmth and humor. It genuinely means a lot.
I want to be transparent with you: my stories are originally written in Hungarian, and I translate them into English myself. It’s not a perfect process, and sometimes things slip through — especially when life gets complicated, as it has been lately.
I didn’t want to leave my readers without a new story, even during a more difficult personal period. But you’re absolutely right, and I will correct every mistake you pointed out.
Thank you for being the kind of reader who pays attention. That’s rare, and I’m grateful for it.
With warmth,
Arden Tomas 🏳️🌈
Truthfully, I didn’t consider the language change, even though I know you’re Hungarian. Please forgive me for the oversight (ignorance?).
I hope it’s clear from previous comments that I *LOVE* your writing and consume it joyfully. So thank you for saying “with warmth and humor” because they’re genuine.
I have a tendency to be over-aware of grammar/spelling/continuity quirks as I read. Normally, I keep my thoughts to myself but spotting multiple things in a short story compelled me - so others would experience it for the beautiful thing it is. ❤️
Thank you, MV1! 😊 This means so much to me. Please don't apologize for being thorough - that's exactly the kind of reader I want to have. Your attention to detail is a gift, and I'm grateful you shared it with me. It will only make the next story better. Thank you for reading with such care and heart. 🙏❤️
Arden, what a nice and sensual story. Born out of an accident, "Arden" is discovered by Will and brought to the safety and shelter of his cabin. And then Will goes into doctor mode to make sure nothing is broken and the sprain doesn't get any worse. And nothing gets worse. Only better. And warmer. And hotter. And the words for the sex scenes were "soft" but powerful. And didn't disappoint. 😊
If there is more Arden and Will, make sure they walk together on their hikes. Unless Will brings home another injured hiker. 🥵
Dave, this comment absolutely made my day! 😊 You've perfectly captured exactly what I was going for - that slow burn from accident to safety to something much, much hotter. And "soft but powerful" is such a beautiful way to describe those scenes. That's exactly the energy I wanted.
As for more Arden and Will... let's just say I don't think Will will be bringing home any other injured hikers. He's got his hands full with this one. But they might just get lost on a hike together again soon... 🥵🔥
Thank you for reading so closely and for this incredible feedback. It means the world! 🙏❤️
Just absolutely gorgeous! 😍❤️🤌
Thank you so much, Prachit! 😍❤️🤌 So glad you're enjoying it! More to come soon! 🔥
Thank you, Asianprinz! 😊 I'm glad you liked the photos with the story. I think they really add to the atmosphere and help set the mood. 🙏