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Mark Dean's avatar

A beautiful redition of arrival. Witnessed and marked by a house. Souls bared and touched, understood for the first time.

Arden Tomas™ 🏳️‍🌈's avatar

Thank you — that means more than you know.

Yes, it was an arrival. Not loud, not dramatic, just the quiet moment when a place finally stops feeling foreign, and a person stops feeling unheld.

Some houses only shelter the body. Others — the truth.

I’m grateful you felt that in the scene.

Steven Rentschler's avatar

Tender, subtlety passionate, someone finding the strength to open the door.❤️🫂🔥🔥🔥

Arden Tomas™ 🏳️‍🌈's avatar

Thank you.

It means a lot that you felt the quiet strength in it — not just the pain, but the opening.

That is exactly the journey I’m trying to give language to.

Gary Wait's avatar

Beautifully lyrical, touchingly honest, deeply genuine. I'll respond further via email.

Arden Tomas™ 🏳️‍🌈's avatar

Thank you, Gary.

Your words always reach me in a place beyond surface reading — you don’t just react, you receive.

I’m grateful that the story could touch you in that way.

I’ll wait for your email, and I’m looking forward to continuing the conversation there.